Posts Tagged ‘poetry’
Photo Serendipity
A few days ago, I unexpectedly received a photo from a cycling friend, Curt. It sparked a brilliant bout of serendipity for me.
In the photo, I am playing guitar, surrounded by people I recognized from years of riding the annual June “Jaunt with Jim” bike adventure. The image failed to trigger any specific memory of the moment depicted. Curt texted that 2003 was written on the back.
The bearded fellow over my shoulder is Doug Willhide, who happens to write and share regular snippets of his own “take on things and experiences,” which he calls “Nutshells.” For some reason that I’m not overtly aware of, I decided to share this picture with Doug. The response I got back was not on my radar.
He wrote that he believed that picture was from Ladysmith, WI, and included “notes” he’d found about that second-to-last day in 2003. A mere six paragraphs depicting in detail the entire day, from breakfast to crawling into his tent that night.
To my utmost surprise, Doug’s notes captured the place and moment when Jim Klobuchar gathered everyone on the lawn of the church outside of Catawba after lunch to read a poem I had written about the trip. That was a memory that I had lost all specific details of, beyond how it felt to be standing beside him as he read it, and the wonderful responses from folks afterward.
The serendipity of Curt randomly sending me this photo, my arbitrarily passing it along to Doug, the picture being from that very day when Jim read the poem to the group, Doug having found his notes from that year, and his capturing the pertinent details… it gives me chills.
It makes me feel like we are all more connected than we tend to notice.
Backstory:
On the Friday night that all the riders gathered at the start in 2003, I had asked Jim if I could read my poem to the group. He took it from me, pocketed it for the moment, and wandered off to greet others. The next day, he approached me and said he liked what I had written and wanted to read it to the group himself.
My first reaction was resistance. Would he get the cadence right? Was he unwilling to share the spotlight for even a brief moment? How could he even ask?
But just as quickly, my respect for his reputation as a writer and his journalistic credentials had me thinking, “Jim Klobuchar wants to publicly recite poetry I wrote?!” I was definitely honored. I had no idea he would end up making me wait until the following Thursday. I also had no clue that he would call me up to stand beside him while he performed it.
Between struggling not to blush too much, I was rewarded with seeing the reactions on people’s faces.
He couldn’t have timed it any better. It’s long been one of my most treasured moments.
I eventually wrestled that prose to fit into a melody and turned it into a song with a sing-along chorus. A friend helped me record a multitrack version of the song, which I combined with a slideshow of photos from the bike trips.
It was a special day when I knocked on Jim’s door to present him with a video about the bike adventures he conducted for 39 years.
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Wordsmith Arts
When no intended meaning is applied to the assembly of words and phrases conjured from the empty cavern of an idle mind… this is the kind of outcome that might result:
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one more photo
this and that
frick and frack
a thousand pin pricks
partially intact
sounds swirling
soaring
effortlessly advanced
lied about incessantly
never given a chance
happening rather fast
captured there on video
in the absence of a plan
echoing reality
in fading light
waving everybody off
with nary a casual glance
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It may, or may not, stand on its own as a work of poetry, but if these words were lyrics of a song and surrounded or augmented with an interesting melody and enticing instrumentation, the words in all their obscurity could be granted a completely different essence.
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When there is a sudden, unexpected loud sound, [BANG!] it is common to hear the response, “That scared me!” I find myself preferring to say that it startled me. I’m not scared that there was a loud bang, but I wasn’t expecting it. When it is a person who suddenly appears when you didn’t expect, wouldn’t it be nicer to tell them you were startled, not scared by them?
Now, if it is a demogorgon that startles you, then it would be better to say that it scared you!
Words.
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There are two responses that Cyndie and I have noticed are commonly used in text communication with those who have grown up with smartphones.
“No problem.” At first, it seems like a perfect informal acknowledgement, but when it is the same response to a range of different texts back and forth, it starts to come across as lacking. The ones who are quick to produce a silly meme GIF get a pass.
“No worries.” I wasn’t worried. I was just clarifying. Don’t scare me like that.
Are you implying I am old? Why in my day… our elders taught a required phone etiquette. I remember feeling awkward after our kids got old enough to have friends over, and I was addressed as “Mr. Hays” by one of them. Seemed way too formal. It got easier when Elysa and Julian got into soccer, and kids could call me “Coach.”
It did seem wrong to let them call me John. I was always happy to be addressed as “Elysa’s Dad” or “Julian’s Dad.” Yeah, that’s me.
I suffered when trying to correct Julian’s choice of “me and my friends” over “my friends and I” only to be informed that he knew the proper usage, but that’s not the way the kids talk with each other, and it would sound out of place among them.
Cue the “Music Man” scene… “Are certain words creeping into his conversation? Words like “swell” and “so’s your old man?”
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Flavors
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my life
in flavors
is mostly plain
crunchy isn’t a flavor
but sometimes I feel like that
sour happens
more than I like to admit
vanilla
and just a little bit lemon-y
is not all that bad
but not close to accomplishing sweetness
sweet is the best, of course
chocolatey, too
almost always aligning with happy
which is totally cool
on the other hand
if cloudy describes a flavor
my life would recognize
precisely how that tastes
nutty seems appropriate
and a little salty I guess
then mellow
with a hint of some mint
occasionally carbon black
burned by flame
too many minutes too long
while on a really good day
it’s all hot-fudge malt
and a favorite song
never ending
never fading
living large
even after it’s gone
but the flavor of love
it tops them all
since it never ever runs out
and travels through space and time
all hearts, roses, & candy
blushes and winks
warmth
truth
reality
eternity
all of which
we get to season
to taste
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Fatal Cosplay
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Military madness
was killing my country
solitary sadness
comes over me
“Military Madness” by Graham Nash, from the album “Songs for Beginners” 1971
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pretend soldiers
besmirching the reputation
of actual trained personnel
killing for sport
clueless about virtue
pawns of billionaires
warping reality
destroying law and order
ripping the life from people who care
cosplay wannabees
sick with infantile understanding
devoid of what matters most
puppets on despicable strings
flailing their emasculated control
at those who know better
who gives their order?
makes them throw smoke?
pull out their weapons
with hapless impunity
rendering despair
at their vile commander’s charge
heaping hypocrisy
on a pro-life mountain
mutilated morals
of indefensible times
what matters most
both a statement and question
oh where are the ghosts
of past, present, future
to rattle their chains
unwind the destruction
rewire the circuits
of basic humanity
reclaim some dignity
restore world order
life and liberty
freedom to be
noble communities
in love with real peace
highest ideals
protecting the weak
shoulders to the wheel
of learning how to feel
healing
not hurting
not playing along
to hide rich men’s crimes
cutting the strings
of evil task masters
make them pay
for their actions
put them on the front lines
stand up for real people
take off those damn masks
go home
sit down in the corner
now look what you’ve done
Jumbled
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I am every mistake I’ve ever made
I am just what you make of me
our laughter is feeding energy to every single thing
what if we never heard the song that would become our favorite
would it change who we’ve become?
I can almost see far enough to understand
the lust lingering large in walls of sound
buried within the prose
if you are seeking access to my spending history
press one now
when we were swinging together
side by side in a previous life
I was the kid in somebody else’s drama
waiting for my bit part
to play out in the elegant design
saying those three old words
as if I’d always known
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Shine
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to shift
to shine
effervesce our essence
through time
to muse
and amuse
infuse ethereal signs
incline
inspire
grasp for elements
of space and time
run through imagined fields
without caring
how far we’ve climbed
washing our souls
in dreams
with glaring omissions
superimposed
on all that we’re sharing
asking for nothing
but understanding
each of us and caring
about the forgotten
how many more
are already entwined
in similar realities
recombined
flying just beyond
singing every song
lasting forevermore
loving to the very core
spirits and vastly more
light
not to be ignored
air
not to breathe
but to be
to finally see
what we’re after
isn’t behind some door
it’s simply all of us
to adore
divine
yet also
inconsequential
desperate for universal acceptance
captivated by the wonder
a need for urgency
uncontained
unrivaled
unravelling in flames
brighter than we perceive
excellence beyond our beliefs
asking us for something
deep down
we’re supposed to already know
achieve
conceive
retrieve
accept
inhale the reality
awaiting an introduction
ever so
patiently
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