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*this* John W. Hays' take on things and experiences

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Written by johnwhays

June 1, 2013 at 7:00 am

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  1. Hi John – nothing is forgotten, many moments relived so that I am cheeky enough to change the ‘snoring’ in your poem to ‘snorting’ as a response to the immediacy of horse sense. Otherwise, I hate to see you and others mowing grass that is dying to be enhanced by the chewing equine motion that would recycle it and make it eternal.

    But the day will come … and you preparation will make all the difference.

    Love you guys

    Ian

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    Ian Rowcliffe

    June 2, 2013 at 8:26 am

    • Thanks so much, Ian. Cyndie is suffering the prolonged waiting we are enduring, and has posted a mural she made about the vision toward having horses. It is on the mantel over the fireplace. We have so much lush green grass here now, the horses are going to be thrilled to have it, and I will be thrilled when we don’t need to mow it!

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      johnwhays

      June 3, 2013 at 11:26 am


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